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Come...
Mind a shot,
a bottle or two?

Just a drink away
to free yourself
from those chains.
Just a drink away
for your senses
to gradually disappear.

Feel the shackles
crumble one by one...
Feel your soul
slowly fade away...

...Freedom at last!

And little did you know
that the next time
you open your eyes,
you'll find yourself
restrained, once again,
with the very chains
that you once have
freed yourself from.
Your drink will melt the shackles away.
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The-WrinklyNinja Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice poem, but can I assure you that drink is yet another shackle that binds us.

Glad your words express that. Drink is a terrible addiction, I know... I'm hooked!

Drink tea... Much better for you. :lol:
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kizokutsuyoi Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
totally :D
and healthy too
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The-WrinklyNinja Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Can taste nicer than a lot of booze too. :lol:
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kizokutsuyoi Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
booze is just...bitter. Especially beer.
room temperature beer. BLEAGH..
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The-WrinklyNinja Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Just stick with tea or coffee. :D
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kizokutsuyoi Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ooh, coffee, I like coffee :D
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The-WrinklyNinja Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm flexible on that one. :lol:
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kizokutsuyoi Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice, good for you then. I only enjoy tea when flavored.
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